[Makebelieve] wren fic: Daniel's Stargate 9&10 - Stargate - gen

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Fandom: Stargate
Characters: Jack, Young Daniel
Rating: FRT
Summary: Jack O'Neill is called back to duty, where he encounters a young
brilliant boy
Category: Wren fic - anyone can post the next seg
Genre: currently Gen, open for change
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Daniel's Stargate
by Teddy & Peja

Part 9
by Teddy.

"Colonel," the General bellowed. "From now on you are responsible for this
child. If he is not in Dr Langford's direct care you are to be with him. Is
that clear?"

"Yes, Sir," O'Neill replied sharply. It wouldn't be any different to the
last few days anyway. Those on base who knew how to look after a kid didn't
really care or were scared off by Daniel's inability to trust them.

When the General left, Jack crouched in front of Daniel, not holding his
hand so that Daniel could withdraw his whenever he wanted. "How about
icecream and jello in the commissary?"

Daniel nodded. Jack imagined for a moment that he saw a smile but then it
was gone. Daniel didn't smile at people. He only smiled to himself over his
work.


Part 10
by Peja


Jack was happy.

Oh, not the I'm on top of the world, ecstatic, ride the bullet happy. He
doubted that he would ever have that again. That had gone to heaven to live
with his lost son.

But he was a kind of all is right with the world, plaster over the gaping
cannonball hole where his heart used to live kind of happy. A happy that
promised there was a reason to get up in the morning again. Someone needed
him.

It was a good kind of happy. A happy that brought a smile to his face and a
softly hummed song to his lips. Young Daniel's song.

So here he was, humming softly, while he made up the the cot he had demanded
be delivered on the spot, no he would not wait until the morning. He had a
boy who needed a bed tonight, dammit,

Young Daniel made a point to ignore his presence, but the sidelong glances
let Jack know Daniel may not show his awareness, but the youngster knew he
was there. And when Jack launched into the third rendition of the tuneless
melody, Daniel added his soft voice in harmony.

for Jack, it was enough. The childless father had a fatherless child. Yeah,
it was enough to build on

[hope this made some sort of sense. Its 3:30 in the morning and my head is
not what I would call focused.]


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