[Makebelieve] Wren: Daniel's Stargate 11&12 - gen

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Fandom: Stargate
Characters: Jack, Young Daniel
Rating: FRT
Summary: Jack O'Neill is called back to duty, where he encounters a young
brilliant boy
Category: Wren fic - anyone can post the next seg
Genre: currently Gen, open for change
Previous chapters posted to
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Daniel's Stargate
by Teddy & Peja...anyone else???


Part 11
by Arawa

But Daniel was not an easy child to care for. He got himself ready for bed,
letting Jack lead him around to the locker rooms and showers. He even
brushed his own teeth pretty well. But when it came time to put on his pjs,
Daniel took one look at the ones Jack had chosen and screamed.

Right thought Jack, that's why these ones look new. They were unused. He
couldn't leave Daniel here alone and he couldn't lead a naked boy down the
hallways of the base. He wondered for a moment or two if he could wrap him
in a towel and carry him but guessed that with Daniel's dislike of being
touched he would just scream the place down.

Jack took the offending pjs and dropped them into the trash can. Daniel
looked into the can and then at Jack, frowning. Jack could see his mind
trying to figure it out, but Daniel's concentration wasn't on Jack for long.
He got dressed. Jack thought he would grow old waiting for him to tie his
laces but didn't dare send Daniel into another screaming match.

He followed Jack along the corridors of the base back to the VIP quarters
Jack had taken over as his own. It wasn't like there was anyone much on the
base after dark. The room had been rearranged slightly to accommodate the
extra bed. Daniel found his bag and put his favourite pjs on. Jack noted the
difference, these were flanelette, not the stretch cotton like the others.
This pair was particularly well worn and a touch too small for him but he
didn't seem to mind. He took his stuffed toy, of which Jack had yet to make
out it's shape and climbed into bed.

"Lights out," Daniel said.


Part 12
by PEJA

Next morning, Jack woke to find Daniel sitting cross legged at the foot of
his bed. "Been there long, Danny boy?"

Daniel tilted his head, looking past Jack while he tugged on the blanket
covering the man.

"Hold up there," Jack said, his fingers fisting around his covers. "Want me
to get up, huh? Hungry?"

"Hungry." Daniel agreed softly. Then added "Daddy."

Jack's jaw dropped, then moved as he tried to form words that would not
come. "Yeah," he said finally. "Guess or all intnets and purposes I'm your
daddy. Okay with you?"

With a quick nod, Daniel jumped off the bed and scramble to his dresser,
grabbing out a pair of jeans and shirt that he quickly dressed in before
trning back to Jack, who still lie watching him from the bed.

Daniel scowled at him. "Hungry."

"Okay, okay," jack said managing to pull himslef from his bed. "I'm getting
up."

That magical, fleeting almost smile that Jack had come to watch for ghosted
over Daniel's lips as he drifted down to the floor to sit with his legs
crossed, waiting for jack to get ready, and occassionally pushing him along
with a quiet, "Hungry."

Jack's heart was soaring as Daniel took his hand and led the way to the mess
hall.

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